Script for new shot

(Alfred McGuiness is sat with his back to the camera in what appears to be some sort of office, the camera moves closer towards his chair before moving over his shoulder, showing a file upon his desk. The Secretary enters.)

The Secretary: Mr McGuiness?

Alfred: I have a case about to start, I would like to ask something of you before I go.

The Secretary: And what would that be, Mr McGuiness?

Alfred: You have been a good secretary to me… As such, I want you to take this.

(Alfred picks up the folder and holds it out for The Secretary, who takes the folder)

The Secretary: Mr McGuiness, this is a transfer request… To the London precinct?

Alfred: Like I said, you have been a good secretary to me, I have a friend in the London precinct, his name is Detective Leroy Jenson… Unlike me, I have a feeling his career is going to last much longer, as such so will yours…

The Secretary: Th-thank you Mr McGuiness!

Alfred: Any time, my good friend… Any time…

(The shot fades to black before fading into the opening shot of the montage of Alfred McGuiness walking into the college and up to the crime scene, the soundtrack starts to play and rises and falls  as a voiceover by McGuiness is played alongside it)

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This is the script for my new revised scene to be played at the start, whilst there is not much dialogue the shots in the scene will be long and slow, emphasising the emotion and feeling of the situation. Everyone in the sequence is very much relaxed and this will show in the shots.